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Tuesday, May 11, 2010
Sunday, May 9, 2010
Rainbow
Yesterday I saw a rainbow.And guess what.
I took a friggin picture!!!! So pretty!! I was like OMG picture time.
Saturday, May 8, 2010
More Poems
Some more poems that I wrote. These were all written in a few of my classes haha.
I don't particularly like this one all that much. Critique it please?
Mediocre Madness
I can't help but think we have something special
I feel it in my heart and it can't be wrong
But life never goes that way
If only you were more helpful
playing with my heart like a game of ping pong
these feelings won't go away
For instance today
I decided to wait, but it was too long
I never saw myself as doubtful
I never heard you say hey
Its time for me to be strong
No more being careful
I can see your potential
I think we belong
Only to my dismay
My feelings could make this dreadful
This can't prolong
I guess you won't give me the time of day
The clock just ticks away
I wish I could go on
If only I were able
Able to tell you all I want to say
Maybe you might think this is a con
But I'm afraid of being rejected and miserable
You and me
How do you see me?
Am I the man I think I be?
Only you can tell me
Please show me what you see
I’ll believe what you ell me
Trust, it is our destiny
No wait, I am not he
You must be dreaming
What have you told me
This is not how I wanted it to be
I only loved you for he
Because we cannot be
He longs for me
I hold his key
Yet I have left him lonely
A poem I wrote for my literature class..
Hurt/Pain
As soon as we feel pain it is often described as hurt.
Feeling hurt and being hurt are two different things.
Most of us do not know this until later on.
I’ve been hurt before as most of us have and I’ve felt hurt too.
Sharing that we have been hurt is a difficult task.
When I was younger, I had fallen and hurt my elbow.
The pain was great but soon subsided.
I thought nothing of this pain as it didn’t last.
Surely I would hurt myself many times along the way.
Only I didn’t think others could hurt me as well.
Some hurt others without meaning to.
Other folks do it intentionally as they have been hurt too.
Being hurt by someone else is such a powerful pain.
That pain can last for days on end.
Even drive some to hurt themselves.
Being hurt like that isn’t cured by a pain reliever.
That type of pain is just simple.
Any kind of hurt can be easier for others to get over.
As we walk through life don’t be afraid of getting hurt.
Just be careful as to how hurt you become.
I don't particularly like this one all that much. Critique it please?
I can't help but think we have something special
I feel it in my heart and it can't be wrong
But life never goes that way
If only you were more helpful
playing with my heart like a game of ping pong
these feelings won't go away
For instance today
I decided to wait, but it was too long
I never saw myself as doubtful
I never heard you say hey
Its time for me to be strong
No more being careful
I can see your potential
I think we belong
Only to my dismay
My feelings could make this dreadful
This can't prolong
I guess you won't give me the time of day
The clock just ticks away
I wish I could go on
If only I were able
Able to tell you all I want to say
Maybe you might think this is a con
But I'm afraid of being rejected and miserable
You and me
How do you see me?
Am I the man I think I be?
Only you can tell me
Please show me what you see
I’ll believe what you ell me
Trust, it is our destiny
No wait, I am not he
You must be dreaming
What have you told me
This is not how I wanted it to be
I only loved you for he
Because we cannot be
He longs for me
I hold his key
Yet I have left him lonely
A poem I wrote for my literature class..Hurt/Pain
As soon as we feel pain it is often described as hurt.
Feeling hurt and being hurt are two different things.
Most of us do not know this until later on.
I’ve been hurt before as most of us have and I’ve felt hurt too.
Sharing that we have been hurt is a difficult task.
When I was younger, I had fallen and hurt my elbow.
The pain was great but soon subsided.
I thought nothing of this pain as it didn’t last.
Surely I would hurt myself many times along the way.
Only I didn’t think others could hurt me as well.
Some hurt others without meaning to.
Other folks do it intentionally as they have been hurt too.
Being hurt by someone else is such a powerful pain.
That pain can last for days on end.
Even drive some to hurt themselves.
Being hurt like that isn’t cured by a pain reliever.
That type of pain is just simple.
Any kind of hurt can be easier for others to get over.
As we walk through life don’t be afraid of getting hurt.
Just be careful as to how hurt you become.
Friday, May 7, 2010
More poems. Couldn't wait to post up these.
Discarded Hope
All we do is the dance
you play with my feelings like a joke
jump around and prance
like a child with a lot of hope
I just smile and feign annoyance
when really I want to cope
cope with all of this romance
could I call it that? nope
so far from it perchance
maybe you could be the one to mope?
let me do the dance
make you out to be a joke
give you the wrong chance
Haha no I can't be that bloke
I'll just let you dance
and give me false hope
All we do is the dance
you play with my feelings like a joke
jump around and prance
like a child with a lot of hope
I just smile and feign annoyance
when really I want to cope
cope with all of this romance
could I call it that? nope
so far from it perchance
maybe you could be the one to mope?
let me do the dance
make you out to be a joke
give you the wrong chance
Haha no I can't be that bloke
I'll just let you dance
and give me false hope
Forceful Nightmare Why do I see you this way
I know its not okay
You only look away
Can you smile for me today
as we lay
what do your dreams say
lets put them on play
show what you really want to say
or maybe its just what I want, at least today
One Sided Heart
Sometimes I really hate you
I don't know why this is so hard
Maybe you are waiting on a Que
I just want this to be the right card
you can't stop the things you do
I have to keep up my guard
even if it makes me blue
wish you wouldn't play with my heart
but you never knew how much I wanted you
not even from the start
Across The Room
I long for the closeness that two people can share
Run my fingers across your hair
Too bad I wouldn't dare
Your eyes would just stare
Why do I care?
Because I fell in love with your beautiful stare
Life is so unfair
I know your eyes look elsewhere
Oh how you damage my hardware
Cause me so much despair
Even a day affair
would sate my constant scare
My feelings need repair
Someone new to rip me from this nightmare
I stand alone in a square
Which is so rare
Yet...I still love your stare
Sometimes I really hate you
I don't know why this is so hard
Maybe you are waiting on a Que
I just want this to be the right card
you can't stop the things you do
I have to keep up my guard
even if it makes me blue
wish you wouldn't play with my heart
but you never knew how much I wanted you
not even from the start
Across The Room
I long for the closeness that two people can share
Run my fingers across your hair
Too bad I wouldn't dare
Your eyes would just stare
Why do I care?
Because I fell in love with your beautiful stare
Life is so unfair
I know your eyes look elsewhere
Oh how you damage my hardware
Cause me so much despair
Even a day affair
would sate my constant scare
My feelings need repair
Someone new to rip me from this nightmare
I stand alone in a square
Which is so rare
Yet...I still love your stare
More poems <3. I have a few more to post up but those can wait.
Thursday, May 6, 2010
A few poems
Okay so I wrote these poems. I'm sort of new at this so give me a break yah? Forewarning I suck at metaphors. Please critique away and give advice, it's all welcomed. I was feeling so strange and emotional when I wrote the first two because of a certain someone. I can't mention any names but I hope I get to see more of them. Kinda doubt it though because I think we're are friends at least but they might not. Oh well...
Some of my poems are written from different perspectives because I'm twisted like that haha. I dunno I just write junk. =D
Expressing Myself
Feeling your tender lips graze mine
A ghost of a chance for me
I dream about you all of the time
I wish we could just be
I want to feel your warmth besides in my mind
My dreams become more vivid with each degree
Yet you don’t know how I’m confined
Expressing myself is so hard, only you hold the key
I’m not even sure of my own true self, wait rewind
So how can I be with you; no don’t flee
Please be kind
Can’t you just listen to me?
It crushes me to think of you with someone, I’ve been declined
You can’t help but hurt me, be free
You don’t know of my burning design
No one can love me like I want you to
Notice Me
I see you from time to time
A smile hits my face
I think; you don't notice me
You say hi, maybe even smile
Its all I can hope for
Wanting you to feel the way I do
Get those crazy butterflies when you think of me
But I'm no mind reader
too afraid to say what I feel
an ocean full of possible rejections, waves of despair
your eyes lie elsewhere
can't you just notice me?
Faster Falling
Make it faster, no keep this pace
Close your eyes
I don't want to see your face
Fill me with these lies
My thoughts blanketed in dark lace
No longer linked with those ties
You can't be him, only replace
Give me one of those temporary highs
So only gasps can escape
Opening my eyes
only wishing to see his face
Leave me falling from these dark skies
no gripping the emergency brake
Some of my poems are written from different perspectives because I'm twisted like that haha. I dunno I just write junk. =D
Expressing MyselfFeeling your tender lips graze mine
A ghost of a chance for me
I dream about you all of the time
I wish we could just be
I want to feel your warmth besides in my mind
My dreams become more vivid with each degree
Yet you don’t know how I’m confined
Expressing myself is so hard, only you hold the key
I’m not even sure of my own true self, wait rewind
So how can I be with you; no don’t flee
Please be kind
Can’t you just listen to me?
It crushes me to think of you with someone, I’ve been declined
You can’t help but hurt me, be free
You don’t know of my burning design
No one can love me like I want you to
Notice Me
I see you from time to time
A smile hits my face
I think; you don't notice me
You say hi, maybe even smile
Its all I can hope for
Wanting you to feel the way I do
Get those crazy butterflies when you think of me
But I'm no mind reader
too afraid to say what I feel
an ocean full of possible rejections, waves of despair
your eyes lie elsewhere
can't you just notice me?
Make it faster, no keep this pace
Close your eyes
I don't want to see your face
Fill me with these lies
My thoughts blanketed in dark lace
No longer linked with those ties
You can't be him, only replace
Give me one of those temporary highs
So only gasps can escape
Opening my eyes
only wishing to see his face
Leave me falling from these dark skies
no gripping the emergency brake
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